Hi Sheila- the drawing is beautiful! I particularly love the view inside the pod on the lower left! Maybe it is the quality of the posting, but the lettering looks crooked to me. “Milk” looks like it is on an angle. Possibly you were waiting for feedback, but I would also point out the lettering is faint. Could the “New Paltz” part either move up underneath the plant title or even on the back of the paper. I think it is great to keep a record of where this was found and/or drawn, but I am finding writing in 3 different areas on this page to be distracting.
@doug-milne Doug, I think you are spot on about the lettering, all three points. That was exactly what I was wondering about. Really appreciate the feedback. I’m hoping the lettering will erase easily! Thanks!
Totally open to feedback here. Think I might need to rewrite the top lettering. See anything wrong there? Other suggestions?
Hi Sheila- the drawing is beautiful! I particularly love the view inside the pod on the lower left! Maybe it is the quality of the posting, but the lettering looks crooked to me. “Milk” looks like it is on an angle. Possibly you were waiting for feedback, but I would also point out the lettering is faint. Could the “New Paltz” part either move up underneath the plant title or even on the back of the paper. I think it is great to keep a record of where this was found and/or drawn, but I am finding writing in 3 different areas on this page to be distracting.
@doug-milne Doug, I think you are spot on about the lettering, all three points. That was exactly what I was wondering about. Really appreciate the feedback. I’m hoping the lettering will erase easily! Thanks!
I can’t wait til I know how to do this! I’m on lesson 3 in Basics…….Patience…I love the delicate milkweed strands.