Hi Sheila! Great to see your work again! I love the colors and the open quality of the composition! The one piece that sticks out to me is the succulent on the very left side (of the left page). It seems too crowded there and is the one spot that differs from the light feel of the rest of the piece. Maybe moving it over to the left a little would help? Maybe consider on that same page putting a small, airy flower (like you have on the right page) in the negative space to the right of the strawberry and also a couple at the top of the left page. Beautiful!
I’m working on this. Nothing glued yet. Thinking of a few more petals in the air and on the ground. Thoughts?
Hi Sheila! Great to see your work again! I love the colors and the open quality of the composition! The one piece that sticks out to me is the succulent on the very left side (of the left page). It seems too crowded there and is the one spot that differs from the light feel of the rest of the piece. Maybe moving it over to the left a little would help? Maybe consider on that same page putting a small, airy flower (like you have on the right page) in the negative space to the right of the strawberry and also a couple at the top of the left page. Beautiful!
Thank you for the specific feedback, Doug. You hit it with the succulent and sprinkling a few more small bits around. I’ll work on it!