Gorgeous colors Sarah! Keep in mind that the main highlight is too centered. It should be over to the left more. I think you could use a little more dark and mid-range tones to enhance the pomegranate’s form. As I mentioned on an other post, the reflected light should not be as white as the Mai highlight. I would add some color to tone it down. Also, as it is a reflection, it should not be a controlled line. It depends on the color of the subject, but often using an ivory pencil in that area to blend the colors more (and add more color on top of the ivory if necessary). This helps to soften the area and convey that it is a glow from light bouncing off the surface the subject is sitting on or next to. You are almost there!
Gorgeous colors Sarah! Keep in mind that the main highlight is too centered. It should be over to the left more. I think you could use a little more dark and mid-range tones to enhance the pomegranate’s form. As I mentioned on an other post, the reflected light should not be as white as the Mai highlight. I would add some color to tone it down. Also, as it is a reflection, it should not be a controlled line. It depends on the color of the subject, but often using an ivory pencil in that area to blend the colors more (and add more color on top of the ivory if necessary). This helps to soften the area and convey that it is a glow from light bouncing off the surface the subject is sitting on or next to. You are almost there!
Thanks very much for your comments, Pomegranates are so beautiful and I look forward to spending more time drawing and painting them!