Great colors and nice form Sarah! The main highlight could be a little whiter, which signifies a shiny surface. The reflected light is too much of a controlled white line. It should not be as bright as the main highlight. Add some color to tone it down. Try using an ivory pencil to blend the colors and then add some of the green on top. This will give the area more of a glow effect, which is what you are trying to achieve.
Great colors and nice form Sarah! The main highlight could be a little whiter, which signifies a shiny surface. The reflected light is too much of a controlled white line. It should not be as bright as the main highlight. Add some color to tone it down. Try using an ivory pencil to blend the colors and then add some of the green on top. This will give the area more of a glow effect, which is what you are trying to achieve.
Yes, thanks!