Greetings! You are off to a good start! You could have the areas flanking the highlight be a little lighter and have more transition of tones especially on the right side as it moves towards the darkest right side edge. Currently there is a large area to the right of the highlight that looks the same tone. Work on having nice crisp lines – the top and bottom look sketchy and you don’t need the shading on the bottom below the cylinder. You are almost there!
Greetings! You are off to a good start! You could have the areas flanking the highlight be a little lighter and have more transition of tones especially on the right side as it moves towards the darkest right side edge. Currently there is a large area to the right of the highlight that looks the same tone. Work on having nice crisp lines – the top and bottom look sketchy and you don’t need the shading on the bottom below the cylinder. You are almost there!
Thanks! It’s a journey…this is better than my earlier attempt. I learn a little bit every day.