Hi Julie- the tomato would benefit from more darker toning on it’s right side to enhance the form. Seeing the actual subject you can see there is a lot more room for color saturation to get to that red. Be sure to keep working on the various tones as you add more layers of color so they don’t get lost. Also seeing your pencils in the picture – the mantra is: keep your pencil points sharp, sharp, sharp!!!!!!! It really makes a difference!!!!
Hi Julie- the tomato would benefit from more darker toning on it’s right side to enhance the form. Seeing the actual subject you can see there is a lot more room for color saturation to get to that red. Be sure to keep working on the various tones as you add more layers of color so they don’t get lost. Also seeing your pencils in the picture – the mantra is: keep your pencil points sharp, sharp, sharp!!!!!!! It really makes a difference!!!!