Hi Susan, I’d even go darker. Especially on the shadow of the top eggplant. Where it is sitting against the other one. You should think about where the darkest darks would be. Where is the light really blocked. Since it is coming from the left, the shadow on the right would be the darkest. I’d also like to see a cast shadow. Especially because you have two objects together. It feels more like a “still life” and wants a cast shadow.
I darkened tones and upped the highlights, as suggested. This eggplant really eats up the color. But it does seem more cylindrical, I think.
Yes! way to be brave and try out those changes. Keep up the good work.
Hi Susan, I’d even go darker. Especially on the shadow of the top eggplant. Where it is sitting against the other one. You should think about where the darkest darks would be. Where is the light really blocked. Since it is coming from the left, the shadow on the right would be the darkest. I’d also like to see a cast shadow. Especially because you have two objects together. It feels more like a “still life” and wants a cast shadow.