Yes! Much better. The colors are working. It was partly that the color of the photo was off on the one we viewed in the workshop. It was much greyer. I like that you are adding cast shadows. I would have them extend more to the right a bit. You have that strong highlight that indicates the light is coming from the left so there should be shadows falling to the right.
thanks Katy. Do you think there should be shadow between the cut piece and the wedge?
16 December 2020
Awesome, Teri!!! I love the detail in the lemon pulp! And the yellow saturation looks so good! I don’t think you need a shadow between the cut piece and the wedge; you’ve already defined that overlap really well.
after modifications from suggestions in workshop over weekend…
Yes! Much better. The colors are working. It was partly that the color of the photo was off on the one we viewed in the workshop. It was much greyer. I like that you are adding cast shadows. I would have them extend more to the right a bit. You have that strong highlight that indicates the light is coming from the left so there should be shadows falling to the right.
thanks Katy. Do you think there should be shadow between the cut piece and the wedge?
Awesome, Teri!!! I love the detail in the lemon pulp! And the yellow saturation looks so good! I don’t think you need a shadow between the cut piece and the wedge; you’ve already defined that overlap really well.
Thanks Vern! I appreciate how much I learned in the class!