These are looking great! I suggest working a little more on your transitions in the lightest tones. There is a visible jump from your lightest tone to the color of the paper. Work to create the slightest bit more transition in those light tones. You have beautiful transitions in the rest of your toning. Just work on the lightest areas. Just a “whisper” of pencil will do the trick. 🙂
These are looking great! I suggest working a little more on your transitions in the lightest tones. There is a visible jump from your lightest tone to the color of the paper. Work to create the slightest bit more transition in those light tones. You have beautiful transitions in the rest of your toning. Just work on the lightest areas. Just a “whisper” of pencil will do the trick. 🙂