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Richard A stjean added a Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
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sheila y. added a Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
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Wow Sheila! I really like how balanced this composition is! I also enjoy the complimentary orange and blue color combination! Beautiful!!!
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Thanks, Doug. I had fun making this picture. I like blue and orange together, too.
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Yes! I 100% agree with Doug. I also love all the different shapes and textures. It’s fantastic.
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Thanks, Pam. The textures were varied depending on their environment. The stickiest is the blue-purple plumbago. The seaweed dried out. The sea holly has treacherous spikes!
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Hélène Chiasson commented on Hélène Chiasson's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Anything to improve upon? I was feeling stuck so posted it to get your input.
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Hélène Chiasson commented on Hélène Chiasson's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi Pam, thank you for your comments. The ´subject’ is a seed case from a tree grown in Hawaii. It was found along the road with other debris, like the beans on the left. I like drawing withered and dried plants or plant parts!
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Richard A stjean commented on Richard A stjean's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Thank you for your comments. I could see mistakes after I posted it. I’ll do it again.
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Richard A stjean added a Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
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Richard, you are getting some nice rich color. I think what your missing is the 3D form. Try doing a grisaille layer with one dark neutral color first, before even thinking about color. I think that red-violet (#194) would work well for your grisaille with this petal. You could post an image of your grisaille first before you add any more color.…[Read more]
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OK thanks
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Pam commented on Hélène Chiasson's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Wow, so much fun! I especially like that round subject on the upper right. It’s so 3D! Great highlights and darks. Nice job!
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Pam commented on Hélène Chiasson's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Helene, I’m loving these! Those leaves are just wonderful!
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Pam commented on Richard A stjean's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
RIchard, your toning is much better. It’s looking much more smooth. Good job. Now just try to get those nine values in there. I would lighten up that dark outline, especially on the left. And than slowly, slowly, slowly, build layers so that the upper left is clearly lighter than the right side and bottom. Add more and more layers to the right and…[Read more]
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Pam commented on Kyra Saulnier's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Love this. Wonderful page. Are you planning on working on it some more?
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Pam commented on Kyra Saulnier's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
I love this page Kyra! Fantastic practice page.
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Pam commented on Kyra Saulnier's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
High Kyra, This is looking great! My recommendation is to keep going. Get those colors super saturated.
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Pam commented on Kyra Saulnier's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Kyra, Lovely colors and toning on this cherry! I think you can get a little darker on the right side and bottom of your cherry to make it look more 3 dimensional. You can also add some more layers of color to saturate the colors a bit more so that you aren’t seeing so much of the white of the paper showing through (other than the highlight area).…[Read more]
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Lucie Riglet commented on Lucie Riglet's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Thank you very much for these great advises ! I am gonna try it !
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Pam commented on Lucie Riglet's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Lucie, what a pretty peach! You are getting the pattern and color of the skin really nicely. Be careful not to make a solid outline around your drawings. I think if you can erase that dark outline and then feather the color of the peach to the edge, it will help. I also think you can get a bit darker on the bottom and right of the peach (think…[Read more]
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Pam commented on Richard A stjean's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Richard, I love the attention to detail on this branch. I would like to see you make it look more 3D by getting much darker on the right side. Great start.
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Hélène Chiasson added a Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
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Wow, so much fun! I especially like that round subject on the upper right. It’s so 3D! Great highlights and darks. Nice job!
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Hi Pam, thank you for your comments. The ´subject’ is a seed case from a tree grown in Hawaii. It was found along the road with other debris, like the beans on the left. I like drawing withered and dried plants or plant parts!
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Hélène Chiasson added a Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
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Helene, I’m loving these! Those leaves are just wonderful!
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Anything to improve upon? I was feeling stuck so posted it to get your input.
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There are a couple of suggestions that I can make. – You may want to be careful about trying not to outline your forms. This does have a certain nice style to it that works with the outlining, but if you want it to look more realistic, try to avoid those dark outlines at your edges. If there is an area that has a dark edge, be sure to feather that…[Read more]
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Hi Pam, your comments help very much. For your information, the item on the left is a very white turnip – Japanese variety. They are pure white when small. I could add some green though for contrast and colour.
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Richard A stjean commented on Richard A stjean's Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
Do you think that this a much smother version?
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Richard A stjean added a Photo 2 years, 11 months ago
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Do you think that this a much smother version?
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RIchard, your toning is much better. It’s looking much more smooth. Good job. Now just try to get those nine values in there. I would lighten up that dark outline, especially on the left. And than slowly, slowly, slowly, build layers so that the upper left is clearly lighter than the right side and bottom. Add more and more layers to the right and…[Read more]
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Thank you for your comments. I could see mistakes after I posted it. I’ll do it again.
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It’s funny. I find that I always see my mistakes more clearly after I post my work too 🙂
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This is off to a good start Richard! Remember you want to try to have 9 different tones starting with the lightest (color of the paper) to as dark as you can get. I would start by lightening the area around the main highlight and also darkening the darkest area on the right side and bottom. Than you can work on the transition of tones in between…[Read more]
Richard, this is such a great improvement from your first sphere! Take Doug’s advice and it will be even better.