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Katy Lyness commented on Linda Proctor's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
My critique would be that the reflective light should have a smoother transition into the tomato. Also it should be darker and redder. Check out the reflective light on my tomato. Also, add a more distinctive core shadow. I’d use a maroon so the color stays vibrant. Maybe some dark sepia in the darkest part. And one other thing, think about the “…[Read more]
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Katy Lyness commented on Linda Proctor's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
Hi Linda,
This is one good looking tomato. Great job! You have every right to be proud of it. Since you are asking for more critique, I will give it to you, but enjoy your moment. This is fine work! -
Linda Proctor commented on Linda Proctor's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
I know that as teachers you have seen hundreds of tomatos drawn by newbies. Where like mine the reference highlight is not in the right place and the shadow is all wrong and the dark areas are too dark in some places and not quite dark enough in others. This tomato to me represents something I was positive I could never ever do. Thank you for such…[Read more]
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Ahh, moving on to roots! This is beautifully done. I like the way you have indicated depth though the shadow of the under roots. My one comment would be to sharpen your pencil. (As silly as that sounds.) If only when you are drawing the front roots and leaves. That sharper contrast will help bring them forward in space.
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Very nice Amelie. These roots have a ton of personality!
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Thank you for lovely feedbacks 😊
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Peta McDonald commented on Peta McDonald's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
@Doug Milne Thank you so much for helping me understand how to do the leaves better. I am working through the botanical basics and haven’t got to the leaf bit yet. 🙂 You are absolutely right about the embossing tool too. I’ll try the things you suggest when I attempt a leaf again. I’ve also just ordered Wendy’s book because I see you guys…[Read more]
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Maureen Doram added a Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
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Hi Maureen, This is a beautiful page. I love when I can learn about a plant while enjoying the beauty of a well crafted drawing. Good job!
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Ohhh. Maureen. This is lovely.
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Oh wow! How beautifully that leaf twists and I love the cross section so much. What a gorgeous piece of work.
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What a beautiful study page! I like how you arranged everything on the page. The twisting leaf is so elegant.
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Pam commented on Machi's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
Sam, that sounds like a great idea!
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sheila y. added a Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
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Is there a lesson here about weeding your garden or enjoying the beauty of wild things? I love the tangle of this. As always, you have done as the best botanical artist do: you have told me a story.
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Loving this Sheila!
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@katylyness thanks for your feedback, Katy! It was fun to work with this jumble, all from the planter. I’m wondering about a few blades of grass. I’ll see.
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Thanks, Pam. I’m not sure I’m finished, yet. Leaving the possibility of adding something to the bottom….
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Katy Lyness commented on Linda Proctor's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
You said it Sam! “lost” is a good term.
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Sam McWilliams commented on Renata's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
Graceful, beautiful, calm, elegant, regal. 🙂 Love the contour marks, and the light shimmering.
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Sam McWilliams commented on Margaret Hahn's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
Gorgeous, Margaret.
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Sam McWilliams commented on Peta McDonald's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
YES!
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Sam McWilliams commented on Peta McDonald's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
These are such great studies!
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Sam McWilliams commented on Peta McDonald's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
Beautiful, Peta!
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Sam McWilliams commented on Linda Proctor's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
I’m so glad that you were brave and posted this! Good job. We are all here to learn. Our own drawings are never as bad as we think. 🙂 All of us “instructors” have drawers full of “lost” drawings.:)
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Sam McWilliams commented on Theodora Korasidis's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
Pretty! Yes you really captured the glow of the mighty sunflower.
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Sam McWilliams commented on Lisa Lebovitz's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
Great little portrait, Lisa! Acorns are such great subjects.
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Sam McWilliams commented on Lisa Lebovitz's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
Twig portraits are the best.
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Sam McWilliams commented on Theresia Schuba's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
Yes to the fuzzies! And the movement and saturated colours are lovely. A gem.
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Sam McWilliams commented on Jill Amadei's Photo 3 years, 1 month ago
So great, Jill. So engaging – could look at this for a long time!
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