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Bonnie Simandle added a Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
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Renata commented on Renata's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the helpful comment, Doug! You are quite right, the tap root would be mainly behind the leaves. Only the roots sprouting laterally would be visible. I like the idea of adding a flower later on! I am finding it a bit dull right now! I might play with tracing paper to see what it would look like if I added the (almost invisible) tap…[Read more]
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Doug Milne commented on Pat Schiebold's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Beautiful Pat!!!! This image has such impact!!!! Stunning!!!!
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mary jo gimber added a Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
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That long petal still bothers me, but I like the rest of the drawing so much, that I will accept it as a drooping petal.
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It still bothers me too. I think I could remove the whole petal and it would look right. What do you think?
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I like it, it feels like this daffodil is dancing to its own beat, but I want it to be shorter.
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I’m glad you got rid of it! Way to make it to the finish line on this one.
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mary jo gimber commented on mary jo gimber's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Doug, thank you. I don’t think I will do a cast shadow. It probably would be better for me to start over. Also, I just deleted the daffodil and replaced it with a photo with further changes. Will go back and see if I can change the direction of the lower petal as suggested.
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Karen Minden commented on Karen Minden's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Doug. This object was from my imagination and I thought is morphed into an apple but apparently not!
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Karen Minden commented on Karen Minden's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
That’s helpful. Thank you. Will try to adjust this drawing.
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Karen Minden commented on Karen Minden's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Doug. Back to the drawing board!
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Wendy Kleinman commented on Wendy Kleinman's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Doug. I was thinking of your so very pretty Amaryllis bulb and this daffodil bulb looks like a little monster in comparison. It will be fun to add some more toning as you suggest. I appreciate your encouragement.
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Doug Milne commented on Karen Minden's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Hi Karen- roots are fun, but they are a challenge. Remember that each root should individually have a range of toning to convey it’s cylindrical form in addition to toning the roots so you are establishing which is in front, back, in between and where they overlap each other. There are so many different types of roots and you will get to try d…[Read more]
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Doug Milne commented on Karen Minden's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Hi Karen- the thing to remember when drawing at night is that shadows are much darker and you have to make adjustments so the shadows don’t dominate the drawing. As an example your shadow here is way too dark (even though it was probably that dark in reality). I am missing the toning on your tulip that would establish it’s form. For a white flo…[Read more]
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Doug Milne commented on Ishbel Galloway's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Wonderful Ishbel! The colors and the saturation are really nice!
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Doug Milne commented on Renata's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Great job Renata! Love your variety of rich greens! What are the roots like? If they are going to be mostly obscured by the leaves I would not put them in. Adding the flower at some point would be a nice addition.
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Doug Milne commented on Wendy Kleinman's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Beautiful page Wendy! Love all the detail on the bulb! I would add toning on the bulb to help convey it’s form. Bulbs are fun – aren’t they?
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Doug Milne commented on Karen Minden's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Hi Karen – if it weren’t for the stem the skin looks like an onion to me. The colors and the thin pattern lines give me that feel. I think you could use a range of dark and mid-range tones to emphasize the apples form. As I said on your petal posting, the shadow should be much lighter and fade lighter as it moves away from the subject.
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Doug Milne commented on Karen Minden's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
The colors are nice Karen. The cast shadow is dominating and I would lighten it. Also take care to do smooth toning on the shadow. Shadows generally are darkest closest to the subject and fade as they move away.
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Doug Milne commented on Bonnie Simandle's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Nice work Bonnie! The right hand sides of the two lower horizontal sections could use a little more dark toning. More like the horizontal section on the top. If the ribbon was shiny your highlight would be correct, if not shiny lighten the areas flanking the highlight.
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Doug Milne commented on Wendy Kleinman's Photo 4 years, 1 month ago
Wonderful Wendy! Great rendering and it is a beautiful and interesting view!
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Thank you! It is so nice to have another person’s input.