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Elizabeth- the shadows look better now that they are lighter. I think you could go farther and even eliminate some of them. I don’t think you need the shadows on the top between the persimmons. Also the shadow doesn’t need to go up so high on the right side. The right persimmon could use a little more shading on the left where it meets the other persimmon. Lastly, the reflected highlight on the right persimmon could be less of a thin line and not go up so high on the side. This is such a great drawing and I was not surprised it got such a positive reaction during the webinar!