I really like the analogous colors in this composition, it has a vibrant, yet calming feeling to it. You are doing a nice job of showing how those petals bend and curl, and you are using your dark colors to nicely show how the centers of those flower dip down into that long tube formed by the bottoms of the petals. The flower on the upper right could have some more negative space in between the petals, they are reading as a bit thick and fused together. The seed/fruit is starting to get some nice form. I like how you are showing the ridges and curves of the sections at the top. How did you have this lit? Your shadows look like you lit this from the upper left. If you did light it from the upper left, I would expect that bright highlight to be more toward the upper left of this subject.
I really like the analogous colors in this composition, it has a vibrant, yet calming feeling to it. You are doing a nice job of showing how those petals bend and curl, and you are using your dark colors to nicely show how the centers of those flower dip down into that long tube formed by the bottoms of the petals. The flower on the upper right could have some more negative space in between the petals, they are reading as a bit thick and fused together. The seed/fruit is starting to get some nice form. I like how you are showing the ridges and curves of the sections at the top. How did you have this lit? Your shadows look like you lit this from the upper left. If you did light it from the upper left, I would expect that bright highlight to be more toward the upper left of this subject.