Oooh. Interesting on the Kraft paper. I think that the Kraft paper makes it more obvious that these are cutouts. I feel like the standards of the iris may need a little more contrast/darks? I don’t know. What do you think?
Thanks for your feedback, Pam. Actually, I’m not happy with my iris and I’ll be reworking the page. My pencil drawing of the iris was a lot better, but I did it on cheap sketch paper.
Nice color story Sheila! Maybe consider something for the negative space to the right of the Iris stem.
Oooh. Interesting on the Kraft paper. I think that the Kraft paper makes it more obvious that these are cutouts. I feel like the standards of the iris may need a little more contrast/darks? I don’t know. What do you think?