Hi Cathie, This is a nice looking page! You are including so many elements! I love the warmth and roundness you are getting in the lemons. And the little seeds are great! The one thing that bother me is the ellipse of the cut lemon. Based on its angle, I am seeing too much of the top. That ellipse should be flatter. Or the side view should be shorter.
This i s very beautiful, Cathie. Nice colour palette of warms and cools. Engaging composition. The twist and seeds! (That bottom seed maybe got a bit big!) Wendy has a lesson on drawing ellipses in citrus in The Joy of Botanical Drawing, if you’d like to practice.
Hi Cathie, This is a nice looking page! You are including so many elements! I love the warmth and roundness you are getting in the lemons. And the little seeds are great! The one thing that bother me is the ellipse of the cut lemon. Based on its angle, I am seeing too much of the top. That ellipse should be flatter. Or the side view should be shorter.
This i s very beautiful, Cathie. Nice colour palette of warms and cools. Engaging composition. The twist and seeds! (That bottom seed maybe got a bit big!) Wendy has a lesson on drawing ellipses in citrus in The Joy of Botanical Drawing, if you’d like to practice.