Cathie, this has a lovely soft ethereal quality to it. You have a nice range of values in the lighter range, and I would like to see you add some more values in the darker range in some areas. I’m having a little bit of trouble figuring out the overlaps in the petals of that main blossom. You might want to go in with a really sharp colored pencil, and tone a little more behind the overlapping petals, and getting some more darks here and there in the little corners that don’t receive any light. It’s such a pretty drawing. Very nice!
Cathie, this has a lovely soft ethereal quality to it. You have a nice range of values in the lighter range, and I would like to see you add some more values in the darker range in some areas. I’m having a little bit of trouble figuring out the overlaps in the petals of that main blossom. You might want to go in with a really sharp colored pencil, and tone a little more behind the overlapping petals, and getting some more darks here and there in the little corners that don’t receive any light. It’s such a pretty drawing. Very nice!
I like your attention/observation to the pistil and anthers. I also like the movement and the bluey-green you’ve captured.