Hi Cathie- the colors are so rich and the highlights really elevate the petals. The flower could use more dark and mid-range tones to enhance it’s form. That is also true of the stem. It is missing a highlight and a range of tones to convey it’s cylindrical form. Don’t forget the shadow on the upper stem created by the flower above it.
That sheen on those petals is just beautiful! Some dark toning on the right side and bottom of the whole form of the blossom will help to give it more 3 form.
Hi Cathie- the colors are so rich and the highlights really elevate the petals. The flower could use more dark and mid-range tones to enhance it’s form. That is also true of the stem. It is missing a highlight and a range of tones to convey it’s cylindrical form. Don’t forget the shadow on the upper stem created by the flower above it.
That sheen on those petals is just beautiful! Some dark toning on the right side and bottom of the whole form of the blossom will help to give it more 3 form.