Hi Colleen- the colors are beautiful and the skin details are really nice! However, it looks flat to me and I would add more dark and mid-range toning starting at the right side to enhance it’s form. Look at the highlight again. It is a bit high and could move to the right a bit. Lastly I would revisit the cast shadow. It comes down too far and is too uniform in tone. I would have it fade out more as it moves away from the apple. You have been doing beautiful work!!!!
Hi Colleen- the colors are beautiful and the skin details are really nice! However, it looks flat to me and I would add more dark and mid-range toning starting at the right side to enhance it’s form. Look at the highlight again. It is a bit high and could move to the right a bit. Lastly I would revisit the cast shadow. It comes down too far and is too uniform in tone. I would have it fade out more as it moves away from the apple. You have been doing beautiful work!!!!