Hi Douglass- I like the darker color you added to the the trumpet. I think it would help if you could reclaim some lighter areas on the petals that are facing the light source. Right now there is not much variation in color that I think would benefit your drawing.
09 April 2020
Nice, Douglass! I agree with Doug that now it’s time to focus on finishing details like perhaps erasing a few places to get some light tones in there, and also some teeny punches of very dark in a couple places (using sensitive line) would finish this drawing off nicely. You did a great job with the toning on the … corolla? the darker yellow part. 🙂 It has some nice depth inside. And beautiful, bright, saturated yellows!
Hi Douglass- I like the darker color you added to the the trumpet. I think it would help if you could reclaim some lighter areas on the petals that are facing the light source. Right now there is not much variation in color that I think would benefit your drawing.
Nice, Douglass! I agree with Doug that now it’s time to focus on finishing details like perhaps erasing a few places to get some light tones in there, and also some teeny punches of very dark in a couple places (using sensitive line) would finish this drawing off nicely. You did a great job with the toning on the … corolla? the darker yellow part. 🙂 It has some nice depth inside. And beautiful, bright, saturated yellows!