Eileen, looking good! I love the addition of the other seeds, and the lemon looks more round. The dark toning on the orange is looking good; maybe feather it toward the center juuuuuuust a bit more so that there is not such a sharp transition… just a little more blending, maybe? (If you are wanting to complete this citrus composition, may I suggest a large fruit behind and between these two? Like a grapefruit or something to tie all the elements together?) Great work!!
Eileen, looking good! I love the addition of the other seeds, and the lemon looks more round. The dark toning on the orange is looking good; maybe feather it toward the center juuuuuuust a bit more so that there is not such a sharp transition… just a little more blending, maybe? (If you are wanting to complete this citrus composition, may I suggest a large fruit behind and between these two? Like a grapefruit or something to tie all the elements together?) Great work!!
Lovely, delicate colours in the lemon.
Thanks for your comment, Suzanne.