This is beautifully rendered Fanny! Great job!!!! Really good job retaining the skin pattern in the shaded areas! That is not easy to do! I would add a little more dark toning on the bottom left subject. The area – top right under the leaf and where it meets the the subject to it’s right. The leaf looks outlined and I would take a kneaded eraser and lighten the left edge of the leaf. Everything has great form and beautiful toning – really wonderful job!!!!
This is beautifully rendered Fanny! Great job!!!! Really good job retaining the skin pattern in the shaded areas! That is not easy to do! I would add a little more dark toning on the bottom left subject. The area – top right under the leaf and where it meets the the subject to it’s right. The leaf looks outlined and I would take a kneaded eraser and lighten the left edge of the leaf. Everything has great form and beautiful toning – really wonderful job!!!!
Thank you. I used your feedback to make adjustments and I like how it improved the drawing!