Love this composition! I can really feel the “weight” of this pear hanging there. I think this drawing needs a bit more saturation overall. Some nice pops of dark would really make it feel 3-dimensional. Especially on the shadow side of the pear itself and the branch. The leaves have a beautiful, graceful quality. Pay attention to overlaps and get your dark tones right up to the edge of the thing on top with a sharp pencil so there is no light halo, like on the bottom of the middle leaf. Lovely work!!!
Love this composition! I can really feel the “weight” of this pear hanging there. I think this drawing needs a bit more saturation overall. Some nice pops of dark would really make it feel 3-dimensional. Especially on the shadow side of the pear itself and the branch. The leaves have a beautiful, graceful quality. Pay attention to overlaps and get your dark tones right up to the edge of the thing on top with a sharp pencil so there is no light halo, like on the bottom of the middle leaf. Lovely work!!!