Good job, I would make the highlights a tiny bit smaller and quiet down the cast shadows, look at Shelia’s apple before and after to see her quieted shadow
I really like the loose feel of this. Really nice texture too.
10 October 2017
Yes, nice texture and good dark tones on the shadow side of the front lime. I think you did a nice job with perspective here; the size of these 2 limes and their placement look very realistic. There is some nice toning in there where the 2 fruits overlap as well, but I suggest “feathering” a bit more there, so we see less of your directional strokes. I agree that your cast shadows are reading very dark; they could soften a bit. (Have you tried cutting a lime open and adding a cut section to this drawing? 🙂 It could look really awesome.)
Good job, I would make the highlights a tiny bit smaller and quiet down the cast shadows, look at Shelia’s apple before and after to see her quieted shadow
I really like the loose feel of this. Really nice texture too.
Yes, nice texture and good dark tones on the shadow side of the front lime. I think you did a nice job with perspective here; the size of these 2 limes and their placement look very realistic. There is some nice toning in there where the 2 fruits overlap as well, but I suggest “feathering” a bit more there, so we see less of your directional strokes. I agree that your cast shadows are reading very dark; they could soften a bit. (Have you tried cutting a lime open and adding a cut section to this drawing? 🙂 It could look really awesome.)