After my feedback I tried adding more tone, especially 8 and 9. The left one I uploaded before. The second one is the same but after work, the right one is new. Is this better??
Greetings! The branches are looking good! Much crisper! The arc tone bar has #9 tone (black) on the very right and the tones get lighter as you move left. With that in mind you could use more of the darker tones on the right side of your branches. The left side of your branches look good, maybe a little dark. The left edge of the branch should be #4 tone. It is is not as dark as the right side because it is closer to the light source. If this is a very shiny branch your highlight would be good. If it is a matte finish I would lighten either side of the highlight. Keep up the good work! Thanks for the comment on my amaryllis bulb!
After my feedback I tried adding more tone, especially 8 and 9. The left one I uploaded before. The second one is the same but after work, the right one is new. Is this better??
Greetings! The branches are looking good! Much crisper! The arc tone bar has #9 tone (black) on the very right and the tones get lighter as you move left. With that in mind you could use more of the darker tones on the right side of your branches. The left side of your branches look good, maybe a little dark. The left edge of the branch should be #4 tone. It is is not as dark as the right side because it is closer to the light source. If this is a very shiny branch your highlight would be good. If it is a matte finish I would lighten either side of the highlight. Keep up the good work! Thanks for the comment on my amaryllis bulb!
Thanks again Doug. I will take this advice for my next exersise.
Awesome improvement!