After my feedback on the top left tomato I tried more grisaille toning, see top right. The borrom one is a new one. I feel it still is not quite there. More toning?
Hi- you can definitely see the tomato has more form to it after you worked on it! You don’t need as much mid-range tone on the left side as you have done. Remember that is the side closest to your light source. The tomato on the bottom is similar to your first effort. I don’t see the range of tones that are needed to convey the round form. Refer back to your tomato on the top right because it is really good and that is what you are striving for!
After my feedback on the top left tomato I tried more grisaille toning, see top right. The borrom one is a new one. I feel it still is not quite there. More toning?
Hi- you can definitely see the tomato has more form to it after you worked on it! You don’t need as much mid-range tone on the left side as you have done. Remember that is the side closest to your light source. The tomato on the bottom is similar to your first effort. I don’t see the range of tones that are needed to convey the round form. Refer back to your tomato on the top right because it is really good and that is what you are striving for!
Thank you Doug!