Playing around with the composition in photoshop after reading the comments. I’m trying to make that fruit the focal point. The little brown dots will be rendered as seeds swirling around in the wind. I tried to place the leaves on a way that draws the eye to that fruit. I’m getting rid of the 2nd fruit in the original drawing to really make that one fruit the star of the show. I don’t know . Where does your eye go?
Playing around with the composition in photoshop after reading the comments. I’m trying to make that fruit the focal point. The little brown dots will be rendered as seeds swirling around in the wind. I tried to place the leaves on a way that draws the eye to that fruit. I’m getting rid of the 2nd fruit in the original drawing to really make that one fruit the star of the show. I don’t know . Where does your eye go?
To the darkest leaf then the seeds.
Thanks Margaret. I’ll definitely tone that leaf down when I paint it, and pump up the contrast on that fruit. Thanks for the feedback!
Lovely
I go straight to the middle fruit and stay there – I get stuck there. I know I’m late to comment but i miss the other fruit!