Hi Karye, love this page. Your branch is more saturated with dark color here which is great. I would make your highlight on the branch a tiny bit smaller and a bit irregular to make it shimmer. Your leaves are good as are your acorn studies. You can darken the leaf veins a tiny bit and make the veining tones a bit irregular for a more natural look. Great page!
@pkhood Karye, what a fun page! Nice job getting darker on the single branch. It is looking really nice. Close in on that highlight just a little more in places, and I think you’ll get that shimmer that Wendy is talking about. Your acorn is super cute; nice color variation on the nut. Your leaf profiles re very well-done, but the veins are very prominent. You can make them more subtle by thinning them and making them “wobble” a little bit. Great work!
Hi Karye, love this page. Your branch is more saturated with dark color here which is great. I would make your highlight on the branch a tiny bit smaller and a bit irregular to make it shimmer. Your leaves are good as are your acorn studies. You can darken the leaf veins a tiny bit and make the veining tones a bit irregular for a more natural look. Great page!
Like this page. Nice color choices.
@pkhood Karye, what a fun page! Nice job getting darker on the single branch. It is looking really nice. Close in on that highlight just a little more in places, and I think you’ll get that shimmer that Wendy is talking about. Your acorn is super cute; nice color variation on the nut. Your leaf profiles re very well-done, but the veins are very prominent. You can make them more subtle by thinning them and making them “wobble” a little bit. Great work!
Thank you for the comments, I appreciate this and will try your suggestions Wendy and Vern.