Hi Renata- beautiful colors with nice saturation! I like how the image is positioned on the page, but I think I would extend the right end of the stem down a little more. Right now the image is contained in a hexagonal parameter. This may or may not mean having to add another leaf or two, but your focus would still be the group of flowers. Maybe try it on tracing paper to see if you would like it.
Thanks Doug! I like the idea of extending the stem towards the right. I was thinking of adding a fruit as well. Maybe a whole one and a section? Let me know what you think.
Hi Renata- personally, the aspect of this particular drawing that really appeals to me is it’s simplicity. Some drawings you look at and immediately see the open spaces calling out for more details. I think the way the branch has that lovely arch that you should be careful adding something and throwing off the balance. However, I am sure you could pull it off if it is speaking to you.
Hi Renata- I just reread my first comment and it was suppose to be “horizontal parameter”. Hopefully that wasn’t too confusing! Sorry!!!! I will have to give my secretary a talking to! Ha, Ha!!!!!
Hi Renata- beautiful colors with nice saturation! I like how the image is positioned on the page, but I think I would extend the right end of the stem down a little more. Right now the image is contained in a hexagonal parameter. This may or may not mean having to add another leaf or two, but your focus would still be the group of flowers. Maybe try it on tracing paper to see if you would like it.
Thanks Doug! I like the idea of extending the stem towards the right. I was thinking of adding a fruit as well. Maybe a whole one and a section? Let me know what you think.
Hi Renata- personally, the aspect of this particular drawing that really appeals to me is it’s simplicity. Some drawings you look at and immediately see the open spaces calling out for more details. I think the way the branch has that lovely arch that you should be careful adding something and throwing off the balance. However, I am sure you could pull it off if it is speaking to you.
Hi Renata- I just reread my first comment and it was suppose to be “horizontal parameter”. Hopefully that wasn’t too confusing! Sorry!!!! I will have to give my secretary a talking to! Ha, Ha!!!!!