Looking good, Lucille. You are getting some nice 3D form on those lemons. You could maybe get just a teeny bit darker on the lower right side of that front lemon to push that 3D form a bit more. Where the lemons overlap there is a light line between the top lemon and the cast shadow on the bottom lemon. This is a common thing that we see all of the time. Get in there with a sharp colored pencil, and get rid of that white line. You are doing great!
Looking good, Lucille. You are getting some nice 3D form on those lemons. You could maybe get just a teeny bit darker on the lower right side of that front lemon to push that 3D form a bit more. Where the lemons overlap there is a light line between the top lemon and the cast shadow on the bottom lemon. This is a common thing that we see all of the time. Get in there with a sharp colored pencil, and get rid of that white line. You are doing great!
#pam Thank you for these comments. So helpful!