What a great page! I love the twine! I think you could do more with the highlights on the ribbon. I understand that it isn’t a shiny surface, but it is looking a little flat on those front curls. A soft highlight at the frontmost point of the curls would really bring them forward. Also, love the leaf doing a backbend!
Your leaf and twine look awesome. I think one issue on the ribbon is in the middle roll over. On the green line that comes down from the very top, from under the ‘w’, – that green line when it becomes the bottom of the ribbon in the middle curve should head towards the lower right corner of the ribbon line thats under the ‘&’. Does that make sense? I like your writing.
20 January 2022
This little piece of twine is probably my favorite thing from this workshop. It turned out so lovely, Wendy.
Re-shaped ribbon’s fold overs as best I could after workshop critique with Wendy and Fern.
What a great page! I love the twine! I think you could do more with the highlights on the ribbon. I understand that it isn’t a shiny surface, but it is looking a little flat on those front curls. A soft highlight at the frontmost point of the curls would really bring them forward. Also, love the leaf doing a backbend!
Your leaf and twine look awesome. I think one issue on the ribbon is in the middle roll over. On the green line that comes down from the very top, from under the ‘w’, – that green line when it becomes the bottom of the ribbon in the middle curve should head towards the lower right corner of the ribbon line thats under the ‘&’. Does that make sense? I like your writing.
This little piece of twine is probably my favorite thing from this workshop. It turned out so lovely, Wendy.
Again – it’s really fun how you made the writing twist and roll. 🙂