Hi Lucy, This apple looks great! You really are getting good at this! I would smooth the transition of the reflective light as it goes into the body of the apple. It looks a bit thin and sharp. Carefully take an eraser to it. Also I would extend the stem shadow and lighten and soften it as it moves away from the stem.
21 January 2021
This looks great, Lucy! Your toning technique is excellent.
Hi Lucy, This apple looks great! You really are getting good at this! I would smooth the transition of the reflective light as it goes into the body of the apple. It looks a bit thin and sharp. Carefully take an eraser to it. Also I would extend the stem shadow and lighten and soften it as it moves away from the stem.
This looks great, Lucy! Your toning technique is excellent.