Hi Lucy, This apple looks great! You really are getting good at this! I would smooth the transition of the reflective light as it goes into the body of the apple. It looks a bit thin and sharp. Carefully take an eraser to it. Also I would extend the stem shadow and lighten and soften it as it moves away from the stem.
21 January 2021
This looks great, Lucy! Your toning technique is excellent.
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Hi Lucy, This apple looks great! You really are getting good at this! I would smooth the transition of the reflective light as it goes into the body of the apple. It looks a bit thin and sharp. Carefully take an eraser to it. Also I would extend the stem shadow and lighten and soften it as it moves away from the stem.
This looks great, Lucy! Your toning technique is excellent.