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Doug Milne commented on Tamara's Photo 1 month, 2 weeks ago
This is really good Tamara! Once again you have great color selection and saturation! I would point out a couple of things. First, your cast shadow is a little too dark. Shadows should be more of a suggestion to ground the subject to the page. If they get to dark they create contrast which distracts the eye from the focal point. Since your light…[Read more]
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Doug Milne commented on Tamara's Photo 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Great color selection and saturation Tamara! You should be pleased! Be careful not to have an outline. The edge closest to the light source and the portion of edge where there is reflected light especially should not have a dark outer edge. Verithin pencils (by Prismacolor) are great for finishing off a drawing. They are a hard wax pencil that…[Read more]
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Doug Milne commented on Tamara's Photo 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Welcome to the ArtFeed Tamara! Great job with the ribbon shadow lesson.
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Doug Milne commented on Margaret Hahn's Photo 1 month, 2 weeks ago
You are really challenging yourself and doing a great job! My one comment concerns the base of the vase. It should not have a straight bottom. The bottom should have a curve that matches the curve at the top of the vase. Bravo Margaret!
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Doug Milne commented on Margaret Hahn's Photo 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Absolutely gorgeous Margaret! The leaves are just as wonderful as the flowers! Everything works!
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Tamara added a Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Beautiful Tamara! Great range of tones! Be careful – the main highlight is almost in the middle of the branch and ideally should be over to the left a little bit. Sometimes there are breaks in the highlight as when it is interrupted by a bud or missing side branch, etc. Just a general note: the shiner the bark (or fruit skin, leaf, etc) the whiter…[Read more]
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Kellie Patton added a Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Tamara added a Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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This is really good Tamara! Once again you have great color selection and saturation! I would point out a couple of things. First, your cast shadow is a little too dark. Shadows should be more of a suggestion to ground the subject to the page. If they get to dark they create contrast which distracts the eye from the focal point. Since your light…[Read more]
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Tamara commented on Tamara's Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I struggled with drawing clean, sharp edges. Otherwise I am pleased as this is my first attempt at drawing from nature.
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Tamara added a Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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I struggled with drawing clean, sharp edges. Otherwise I am pleased as this is my first attempt at drawing from nature.
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Great color selection and saturation Tamara! You should be pleased! Be careful not to have an outline. The edge closest to the light source and the portion of edge where there is reflected light especially should not have a dark outer edge. Verithin pencils (by Prismacolor) are great for finishing off a drawing. They are a hard wax pencil that…[Read more]
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Tamara added a Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Margaret Hahn commented on Margaret Hahn's Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Final drawing of the Peony – thank you Doug for your helpful feedback!
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Margaret Hahn added a Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Margaret Hahn commented on Margaret Hahn's Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
This was very helpful, Doug. I ended up using the deep fuchsia pink sporadically on the petals which worked great and also deepened the contrasts. I’ll post the final drawing.
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Margaret Hahn commented on Margaret Hahn's Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Thanks,Doug! Your comments are the highlight of my day.
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Doug Milne commented on Laura Rosen's Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Nice strong saturated colors!
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Doug Milne commented on Laura Rosen's Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Hi Laura- You can see on the framed leaf that you captured that there is a dark side and a light side of a leaf and it conveys the dimension and form of a leaf. Nice job!
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Kellie Patton added a Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Kellie Patton added a Photo 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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