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Draw Botanical added a Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
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Katy Lyness commented on Elizabeth Ann Roberts's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
So fun! Beautiful composition! I love that you have included all the relevant information in a jaunty, freeform way. Part of me wants to see more darks in the oranges, so I can read them better. But it works so well as it is, I also don’t want to change a thing.
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Katy Lyness commented on Maureen Doram's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
Hi Maureen,
Another lovely drawing! I see you are liking the Kraft paper. Perfect for those white flowers. I really like that you use many colors in those whites. I also love the feathery quality of the stems. It makes a nice contrast to the solidity of the petals. And the yellow center is so pleasing to look at! I am drawn into the piece. -
Elizabeth Ann Roberts added a Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
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Ingrid Schenk commented on Ingrid Schenk's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
@dougmilne thank you so much for your feedback! Yes, I can see what you mean, will train on the range of tones on an object with a pattern, was concentrated too much on the pattern …
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Ishbel Galloway commented on Ishbel Galloway's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
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Maureen Doram commented on sheila y.'s Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
So beautiful!
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Maureen Doram added a Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
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Hi Maureen, Another lovely drawing! I see you are liking the Kraft paper. Perfect for those white flowers. I really like that you use many colors in those whites. I also love the feathery quality of the stems. It makes a nice contrast to the solidity of the petals. And the yellow center is so pleasing to look at! I am drawn into the piece.
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@vern I am really liking the Kraft paper, especially how the midtones can happen so effortlessly. It’s a little more forgiving with erasure too. Had to pick all our cosmos last night as snow has arrived today!
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@katylyness It took me awhile to really plunge into the centre of the paper, I would often avoid it but it happens a little more often now! Thanks for your comments!
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So nicely done, Maureen. Great to see you again today.
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Very elegant giving off a wonderful softness
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I love this composition.
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Doug Milne commented on Ingrid Schenk's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
Hi Ingrid- the branch looks great! I think you could use a little more dark toning on the right side, but you have nice smooth toning and you did a great job capturing the bark texture. The apple is also good, but there are still some things to work on. The color selection and saturation are very good. You also did a nice job with the patterning.…[Read more]
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Doug Milne commented on Douglass Reitter's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
Great page Douglass! I love the mix of black and white and color. Everything is very nicely rendered! Those roots are wonderful! I would suggest moving your name. Maybe put it under the Preserve line. Right now it looks as if it is connecting the fern and the mushroom. Great job!
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Doug Milne commented on Pat Schiebold's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
Beautiful job Pat! You did a great job capturing the colors and details. There are some little details – like how the main vein has some twists and turns that you have straightened out and also how the bottom of each side of the leaf curves down where it meets the stem. These are small details, but are very important because they are common to…[Read more]
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Beautiful job Pat! You did a great job capturing the colors and details. There are some little details – like how the main vein has some twists and turns that you have straightened out and also how the bottom of each side of the leaf curves down where it meets the stem. These are small details, but are very important because they are common to…[Read more]
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The bottom of each side of the leaf curves down to meet the stem. Good suggestion thanks
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Try a cast shadow with verithin gray and black before adding any dark sepia. Also a gray watercolor wash for a cast shadow is a good place to start as well.
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Jody Meese commented on Jody Meese's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
@sam-mcwilliams Thanks Sam! Luckily I did the lettering in pencil in case I changed my mind!
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Ingrid Schenk added a Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
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Hi Ingrid- the branch looks great! I think you could use a little more dark toning on the right side, but you have nice smooth toning and you did a great job capturing the bark texture. The apple is also good, but there are still some things to work on. The color selection and saturation are very good. You also did a nice job with the patterning.…[Read more]
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@dougmilne thank you so much for your feedback! Yes, I can see what you mean, will train on the range of tones on an object with a pattern, was concentrated too much on the pattern …
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Jill Amadei commented on Jill Amadei's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
Thanks so much for the positive feedback! I really enjoyed drawing this gourd š @doug-milne @katylyness @sam-mcwilliams
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sheila y. commented on sheila y.'s Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
@sam-mcwilliams Thanks, Sam. I was wondering if the greens were too washed out looking, but they really are a variety of light greens. Also, the mid tone of the paper and how much saturation it can take is still something Iām learning about. I hope I can get my hands on some seeds and flowers this season or next. -
Sam McWilliams commented on Ishbel Galloway's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
Again, what a lovely eye and hand you have, Ishbel. Such a graceful composition and treatment.
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Sam McWilliams commented on sheila y.'s Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
Stunner! You and Kraft paper are getting to be very good pals. It’s luminous. I’m excited to see flowers and seeds.
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Sam McWilliams commented on Linda TALLEY's Photo 4 years, 11 months ago
This is lovely, Linda. I think you can still achieve some darker tones in your greens to show the cylinder-ness of those stems and more form in the okra. I like the lettering very much. Next time you could move it down a bit, perhaps leave a bit more space between the lettering and the plant.
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Autumn is a great time to draw nuts and seeds, fall leaves, and mushrooms! It’s fun when several people are drawing the same subjects at the same time. Join us and draw seasonal specimens! Read more about what to draw this season: https://ckarchive.com/b/wvu2hghmlx27