Great job Becky! Your tomato looks so plump and juicy! Your color selection and saturation are really well done! Shiny tomatoes usually have multiple highlights which you have captured beautifully! There are a couple of spots where I see white lines such as the very bottom and in some of the creases where segments meet. I would not expect highlights in those spots and they are distracting. I would either tone them down with color or color them in completely. I would expect the bottom of the segment to the left of center to have some shadow and I would add some darker toning there. Your work is beautiful – gorgeous smooth toning!!!
Becky, this is beautiful. I also love how you photograph your pieces on fabric. Are you planning to frame your pieces incorporating these fabric patterns?
Great job Becky! Your tomato looks so plump and juicy! Your color selection and saturation are really well done! Shiny tomatoes usually have multiple highlights which you have captured beautifully! There are a couple of spots where I see white lines such as the very bottom and in some of the creases where segments meet. I would not expect highlights in those spots and they are distracting. I would either tone them down with color or color them in completely. I would expect the bottom of the segment to the left of center to have some shadow and I would add some darker toning there. Your work is beautiful – gorgeous smooth toning!!!
Becky, this is beautiful. I also love how you photograph your pieces on fabric. Are you planning to frame your pieces incorporating these fabric patterns?