Hi Colleen- these branches look really good. The top of the branch on the left has nice crisp edges, but gets fuzzier towards the bottom. I would make the same comment on the branches as I did on the fruit and that is you are missing the range of tones. It is hard to have a 9 tone range on a thin subject, but it is possible to show a good range that will convey the subjects cylindrical shape. The placement of the highlight and the toning to the left of the highlight are very well done. Adding the range of toning to the right of the highlight will take this drawing to the next level. Keep up the good work!
09 April 2020
Yes, really nice, Colleen! I think adding color was a great step forward here. Agree with Doug about the toning around the highlight. Just these little tweaks will make a big difference as you learn these techniques. You’re doing great.
Hi Colleen- these branches look really good. The top of the branch on the left has nice crisp edges, but gets fuzzier towards the bottom. I would make the same comment on the branches as I did on the fruit and that is you are missing the range of tones. It is hard to have a 9 tone range on a thin subject, but it is possible to show a good range that will convey the subjects cylindrical shape. The placement of the highlight and the toning to the left of the highlight are very well done. Adding the range of toning to the right of the highlight will take this drawing to the next level. Keep up the good work!
Yes, really nice, Colleen! I think adding color was a great step forward here. Agree with Doug about the toning around the highlight. Just these little tweaks will make a big difference as you learn these techniques. You’re doing great.